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Christina老师作文真题解析：9月27日大作文讲解
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9月27日雅思写作大作文题目：
In some countries, many people have chosen to live by themselves in recent years. What has caused this to happen? Does it have a positive or negative effect on the development of society?
审题过程中应该首先明确问题：
What has caused this to happen? 什么原因
Does it have a positive or negative effect on the development of society? 积极还是消极对于社会发展而言
根据问题决定文章结构：
Introduction：引入题目+ 指出观点 （这里应该注意考官们并不喜欢surprise ending，所以开头中直接回答问题指出观点是很重要的）
Main paragraph：原因
Main paragraph：积极
Conclusion：总结+ 再次阐明观点
题中关键词替换：
People – adults, individuals, city dwellers, citizens, the younger generation, working professionals…
Live by themselves – live alone, solitary living, living solo, living independently, self-reliant, live away from family and friends, live on one’s own…
Cause – lead to, result in, contribute to, factor, reason, …can help to explain…
Positive – beneficial, impact…positively, advantageous, exert positive effects on…
Sample Introduction：
It is true that solitary living has become the new norm for a large number of young adults especially those residing in developed countries and emerging economies. Several factors can help to explain this trend, and in my opinion, this move towards greater independence is beneficial not only for the individuals involved but more so for the society as a whole.
it is true that... 承认文中给出的现象是事实
become the new norm 成为新的标准（规范，准则）
residing in = living in
in developed countries and emerging economies 在发达国家和新兴经济体中
for the individuals involved 对于相关的个人
society as a whole 整个社会
9月27日雅思写作大作文题目：
In some countries, many people have chosen to live by themselves in recent years. What has caused this to happen? Does it have a positive or negative effect on the development of society?
审题过程中应该首先明确问题：
What has caused this to happen? 什么原因
Does it have a positive or negative effect on the development of society? 积极还是消极对于社会发展而言
根据问题决定文章结构：
Introduction：引入题目+ 指出观点 （这里应该注意考官们并不喜欢surprise ending，所以开头中直接回答问题指出观点是很重要的）
Main paragraph：原因
Main paragraph：积极
Conclusion：总结+ 再次阐明观点
题中关键词替换：
People – adults, individuals, city dwellers, citizens, the younger generation, working professionals…
Live by themselves – live alone, solitary living, living solo, living independently, self-reliant, live away from family and friends, live on one’s own…
Cause – lead to, result in, contribute to, factor, reason, …can help to explain…
Positive – beneficial, impact…positively, advantageous, exert positive effects on…
Sample Introduction：
It is true that solitary living has become the new norm for a large number of young adults especially those residing in developed countries and emerging economies. Several factors can help to explain this trend, and in my opinion, this move towards greater independence is beneficial not only for the individuals involved but more so for the society as a whole.
it is true that... 承认文中给出的现象是事实
become the new norm 成为新的标准（规范，准则）
residing in = living in
in developed countries and emerging economies 在发达国家和新兴经济体中
for the individuals involved 对于相关的个人
society as a whole 整个社会
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